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Dipti  Vyas's avatar

You let sensation think without becoming language too quickly.

The poem moves like a careful hesitation, each line not advancing so much as testing the threshold between arrival and restraint. Touch is never fully granted its completion; it remains in a state of near-contact, where perception becomes more intimate than possession.

Even grammar loosens here, shedding punctuation the way skin sheds certainty, so that experience can remain porous rather than concluded. And in that porosity, the body is not described from outside, it is listened to from within its own anticipation.

What lingers most is the final inversion: not that touch leaves a memory, but that the surface itself becomes the remembering.

AsukaHotaru's avatar

I had such a good time inside allllll that hush and skin and almost-touch... and now I’m just staring at the wall a little bit wrecked.

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