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Dawnithic's avatar

This is quietly powerful, Mark. The way you show that motivation follows movement feels deeply true. What stands out is how naturally momentum begins, without any force or drama.

Every step carries a quiet intention, not motivation, just a small agreement between body and ground. Then comes the second step, and then the third, each one born simply because the previous one happened.

Somehow, it is that first movement that changes everything. Not because it knew the destination, but because it allowed the journey to begin. I found all of this reflected in your poem. A beautiful piece of writing, without a doubt.

Moll Moonlight's avatar

I needed this today. When things seem too difficult to begin, the simple act of just beginning that whirs the whole machine of being into motion. Yes, I know you're demonstrating motion as metaphor, and direction, but as always it carries its weight of other meanings like the cracks on the pavement that read like a braille of lost summers and winters that have thawed and gone

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