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Source Of Peace's avatar

we floated long enough

for stillness to feel earned,

for motion to stop asking

what it was for

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Dipti  Vyas's avatar

Oh brother! I had to read it a few times! It feels like a dream that refuses to resolve—and that’s the magic of it.

The way “the water held us / without holding” is quietly devastating, and that ending—still warmth—lingers like a pulse after the lights go out. Beautifully unsettling, in the most gentle way.

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