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Jeanne Vessantra's avatar

One… two… three… type.

The same results. The same mind.

No bleeding heart.

One… two… three… type.

The defection does not matter now.

But I sense smoke in my belly.

Dipti  Vyas's avatar

Mark, I tried to edit my comment and failed miserably. So here’s the unedited version:

This reads like perfection without presence. Every protocol followed, every interval stable, every line of light accounted for, yet the detail that lingers isn’t what happened, but what didn’t. No irregularity, no variance, no input required. The system moved as if it already knew the outcome, and we are left only with the record of a procedure that observed itself.

The thin blue line, sitting where it was placed - disregarded, unnecessary is the pulse. It’s the trace of something that could have mattered, quietly ignored. Containment, consistency, resolution: all present. Yet there’s a subtle tension in noticing how thoroughly everything was anticipated, how fully expectation replaced intervention. This is order that has no witness, and it teaches that the calmest file often carries the sharpest awareness.

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