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John Sheils's avatar

Ain’t the short ones always the best. Nicely done.

Dawnithic's avatar

Mark, you’ve beautifully brought to life the proverb... “All that glitters is not gold.” You show how the moon’s soft, warm light...so alluring and beautiful...can also leave us exposed. In your poem, every allure carries hidden danger, and every beauty its subtle veil, so that the reader feels how attraction and risk are two sides of the same thread. Most strikingly, the poem invites us to trust that light despite its danger...the delicate tension between trust and risk gives every moment its meaning.

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