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Adrião Pereira da Cunha's avatar

The text feels like watching someone realise, quietly, that the world they know has shifted a few millimetres without warning.

Its pauses carry the weight of lived habit those small, private moments where we steady ourselves before moving.

When the process begins to advance without him, there’s a tenderness in his confusion, as if something familiar has stepped ahead and forgotten to take his hand.

What once required care now unfolds too smoothly, leaving him slightly unanchored.

He stays present, but the work no longer waits for his breath, his timing, his small human hesitations.

The ease feels like a gift and a loss at the same time a soft displacement.

Even hesitation arrives pre-shaped, as though the decision had been made somewhere just beyond his reach.

The space where choice used to live feels narrower, but strangely intimate, like a room rearranged while he slept.

Completion comes early, quietly, leaving him standing inside a moment that has already moved on.

What lingers is a closeness that isn’t comfort or threat just the quiet ache of being slightly out of step with oneself.

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Mark, your piece Irreversible Function contains two layers of depth. After the arrival of the machine, human functions themselves became an Irreversible Function, but think, who created it? It was humans. And humans, if they wished, could reverse it, meaning full control could return to their hands. Yet the second layer is, why would they do that? They created this system for their own ease and convenience, and in that pursuit of simplicity, they have already sunk into it. The desire for ease has silently reduced their engagement and control without them noticing, and that quiet shift is the most dangerous. The machine itself does nothing on its own; everything is the result of human design and decision, yet humans rarely use that power because the pleasure of ease and convenience clouds their self-awareness.

The piece also serves as a silent warning. Smoothness and convenience can sometimes signal a loss of power or control, forcing humans to ask whether they can truly master their creation or whether they will remain forever trapped in the web of convenience. This is the core and contradiction of the Irreversible Function. Control always lies with humans, yet the lure of ease prevents them from using it.

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