Hey Mark, I think this poem is wonderful. I interpret it as a very sensual and intimate time between two lovers because of words and phrases like; touch, barely, tore open, loosed, etc.
You’ve managed to capture that ache of a perfect moment so still and suspended that its inevitable end feels less like a fading and more like the entire world folding up and disappearing. In awe ✨
“The rain found shape and traced your curves”. What a lovely image! Beautiful, Mark!
My favourite line Christopher. Thank you!
So beautiful I love this one Mark 💖
Thank you so much @Ethereal Twilight Poetry 💛
This is so dreamy and tenderly beautiful ♥️
Thank you so much for reading and sharing Aaliya! 🥰
This is almost ethereal, wouldn’t you say? It feels suspended somewhere between touch and dream.
That’s a really interesting reading Petra, and I can see that feeling from the ending which removes time, dreams and memories.
Thank you!
<3
That last turn took me all the way out..! Now I am over here all melty and tender and not even pretending to be normal about it...
Awww Asuka! Tenderness from a few little words is the perfect way to be 😍
Thank you for letting me give you a little!
Beautiful. I love the dramatic turn at the end. At least I saw it as dramatic...
Thank you Kate!
Yes, I did slip in a litte turn at the end :)
Hey Mark, I think this poem is wonderful. I interpret it as a very sensual and intimate time between two lovers because of words and phrases like; touch, barely, tore open, loosed, etc.
Thank you so much for sharing Libertarian. That’s such a lovely reading and yes, intimacy and closeness could be themes for this piece.
Thank you!
You’ve managed to capture that ache of a perfect moment so still and suspended that its inevitable end feels less like a fading and more like the entire world folding up and disappearing. In awe ✨