This feels like that moment right when you wake up and you can still feel a dream or a person lingering in the room with you. It's an almost haunting piece.
You’ve perfectly captured that rare, ego-less moment where the body recognizes a connection long before the mind can even find a name for it. Nicely written ✨
This is beautiful 😍
Thank you @Wildwood Writer 🥰
You’re welcome! So beautiful! ♥️🔥
Mark you always write so beautifully!!
Thank you Aaliya! 🥰
Splendid !
Thamks!
It’s like something being sensed rather than described. Very immersive. Loved this! 😊
I’m so pleased it landed that way and as intended. Thank you! 🤗
Beautiful. “like something returning
to where it had always been
or close enough”
Thank you Dorie and yes 😊
This is a beautiful poem. Like touching the wind.
Thank you Christopher. Such a lovely metaphor to use and glad the lightness came through 😊
This is beautifully immersive, like being inside a feeling before it has a name. <3
That’s such a beautiful way to read it Petra and also a very interesting idea!
Thank you so much 💛
<3
This feels like that moment right when you wake up and you can still feel a dream or a person lingering in the room with you. It's an almost haunting piece.
That’s such a lovely reading @Darker Ink, and that drifting and dreamlike feel was just what I was aiming for. Almost haunting as well.
Thank you!
Simply beautiful. No better word comes to mind.
Thank you! 💛
You’ve perfectly captured that rare, ego-less moment where the body recognizes a connection long before the mind can even find a name for it. Nicely written ✨