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Laura Lynch's avatar

That was AMAZING!!! Loved this! You are SO creative! :D

Mark Crutchfield's avatar

Thank you, Laura! It was fun to write!

Laura Lynch's avatar

It was literally brilliant! I was gonna try but after reading what you wrote, it felt like a mic drop! LOL! It was truly perfect!

Mark Crutchfield's avatar

Ohhh please try! A few others have like @Sattie R who did a magnificent and completely different take on it

Laura Lynch's avatar

YES!!! 🙌🏻 Thank you so much! 😊

Laura Lynch's avatar

Ok … I’ll give it a shot and tag you! 🤩

Laura Lynch's avatar

I got to it! I hope you enjoy!! https://substack.com/home/post/p-204308453. Thanks for pushing me! 🤩

Mark Crutchfield's avatar

Yay! Reading soon!

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Such a great take on the prompt, Laura! Loved and was giggling all the way through!

Vlad Tverdohleb's avatar

The squidgy underfoot was the signal. The plunk was the warning. The shimmy was the disruption. The clatter was the aftermath. The sproing remains under investigation.

The journey continues. The findings are inconclusive. The dignity is temporarily lost. The coffee is cold. The sock is missing. The confidence is mostly squidgy.

The poems and stories are the process. The process is the journey. The journey is the practice.

Mark Crutchfield's avatar

Thank you, Vlad! Really pleased to have a little squidginess on the journey with you!

Vlad Tverdohleb's avatar

The squidginess is the texture of the path. Grateful to share it with you. 🙏

Petra's avatar

Brilliant! Looks like I've missed a fun prompt. <3

Mark Crutchfield's avatar

Thank you, Petra!

This is still open if you want to join in!

I'd love to see how you shimmy!

Petra's avatar

Awesome! I'm working on it. Maybe tomorrow...

Mark Crutchfield's avatar

Yay!!! Looking forward to it Petra and tag me so I don't miss it.

Petra's avatar

Will do! <3

Words about things and stuff's avatar

That was so much fun to read! I hope you find that sock.

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Thanks Dave! Still searching!

per LEY's avatar

I thoroughly enjoyed this. 😄

Somehow it captures the exact feeling of those days when nothing catastrophic happens and yet everything feels mildly chaotic and slightly off.

"Confidence: Mostly squidgy" may be one of my favorite lines.

And honestly, I agree:

Plunks should probably be respected. 🫶

Mark Crutchfield's avatar

Thanks for sharing a little langauge fun with me, Per LEY!

I love it managed to work out for you! It was a bit chaotic trying to write and hoping it still made sense.

I think I might be using that phrase on my next management report - unfortunately I have other less fund things to write too!

“Respect the Plunks” could fast become my new desktop motto!

per LEY's avatar

This made me laugh. 😄

I loved our little language exchange, and the chaos translated beautifully.

And honestly, I think “Respect the Plunks” contains more wisdom than most management reports.🫶

Mark Crutchfield's avatar

hehe!

It made me think of the 90’s stress management toys for execs!

JGWunderlich's avatar

This was such fun! The way you strung together all those sounds into one gloriously squidgy Wednesday felt like a mischievous Dr. Seuss fever dream. Loved every bit of the chaotic delight.

Mark Crutchfield's avatar

Thank you!

I love the referene to Dr Seuss and completely get it!

a gloriously squidgy and mischievous Wednesday sounds just like a perfect one!

Jeanne Vessantra's avatar

There is something magical in the repetition of words. Like stories, or poems shaped by them. Evocative.

Mark Crutchfield's avatar

Thanks Jeanne! This was part childhood memory and creation of the way we used ti have fun with words and language, and it does feel magical. A lovely reflection 😊

Off Ramp to Brave Spaces's avatar

So clever. Especially liked the ending.

Mark Crutchfield's avatar

Thank you! It was fun trying to make it all work and make sense!

Kate's avatar

Haha this is too funny! Love the image too. Reminds me of my early days in LA, moving apartments, balancing a mattress and a bunch of other stuff on top of my Toyota Scion. Praying the friend of a friend with the truck would come through for me. Eventually I learned that you could rent a U-Haul van for $19, which was probably one of the smartest investments I've ever made.

Mark Crutchfield's avatar

Yes! It really does feel like moving back day before hiring vans!

James (HVR)'s avatar

Onomatopoeia much?

Mark Crutchfield's avatar

Not their days James. Everything got a bit too squidgy!

How about you?

Got many plunks going on?

James (HVR)'s avatar

I've got fwour splunks.

Thanks for asking.

Sattie R's avatar

This was fun to read. I was hearing the sounds when I read the words. I saved this prompt to give it a whirl on the weekend.

Mark Crutchfield's avatar

Haha - Can’t wait to see it!