A poem for my lovely friend Skyler 😊 I grew up on the coast and could see the sea from where I lived as a boy 🌊 This is beautifully written and so atmospheric. Thank you Mark 🙏🏼
“no one moves / tea pours / the baby cries / laughter almost stops” really held the whole piece together for me. The poem stays inside very small physical details, but somehow the emotional shift becomes completely visible through them. Quietly precise work.
I’m overdue a proper plunge into your back-catalogue, my lovely! Maybe my Sunday will be sweet to me and let me indulge properly rather than these fleeting sips!
Thank you for sharing @PancakeSushi 🫶
Oh this was divine Mark ✨
Thank you!
Brilliant as always 🌹
Thanks!
keen catch. beautiful!
Thank you Greg!
So vivid… I can almost hear the silence between all the movement.✨💛
Thank you Ashu! ❤️
Stunning 💙🩵
Thank you Kasu ❤️
So good.
Thank you Mark! 😊
A poem for my lovely friend Skyler 😊 I grew up on the coast and could see the sea from where I lived as a boy 🌊 This is beautifully written and so atmospheric. Thank you Mark 🙏🏼
Thank you Aidan. Really pleased that came through in the piece 😊
So masterfully captured atmosphere...
(cold outside) I would like a tea please...
Thank you Dean!
1 cuppa coming up and 2 digestives, courtesy of the house.
Wonderful! Cheers!
“no one moves / tea pours / the baby cries / laughter almost stops” really held the whole piece together for me. The poem stays inside very small physical details, but somehow the emotional shift becomes completely visible through them. Quietly precise work.
Thank you Antonio, for seeing that hinge. It is that thiny shift which lets other things in.
A lovely reading.
aaaah. gulls hovering and sea mist. jacket flapping in the wind too?
I am there.
Me too Linda!
Wow, the barely contained tension here is so powerful
Thank you Moll ♥️
I’m overdue a proper plunge into your back-catalogue, my lovely! Maybe my Sunday will be sweet to me and let me indulge properly rather than these fleeting sips!
Awwwww
You dont need to but I also like you rummaging in my old draws darling! ❤️
Oh that is the naughty chuckle I needed to finish my Saturday evening off right! 🤣🤗
Hehe!