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Sattie R's avatar

Now I must have ripe peaches.

Mark Crutchfield's avatar

Hehe! Me too! πŸ‘

Sunshine's avatar

This poem is absolutely delicious. I could feel the heat and sweetness of summer in every line. It’s so sensuous and alive.

Mark Crutchfield's avatar

Thanks, Sunsine!

Be Budding's avatar

This is beautiful, Mark

Mark Crutchfield's avatar

Thank you, Be β™₯️

EJOD's avatar

Yummy!

Mark Crutchfield's avatar

Hehe. Thanks!

Christopher Van Name's avatar

The fruits that love can bear!

Aaliya's avatar

So beautifully articulated

Mark Crutchfield's avatar

Thank you, dear @Aaliya !

Vlad Tverdohleb's avatar

Finding words is often less about inventing something new and more about discovering the shape of what was already there, waiting beneath perception.

Language can feel like retrieval.

Not because it creates the truth, but because it gives structure to what was previously only felt.

And sometimes the right words do not just describe experience.

They reorganize it.

Mark Crutchfield's avatar

Thank you, Vlad, and I love those last two lines. That is what happens inside us.

Vlad Tverdohleb's avatar

Exactly.

That’s why naming can be such a profound act.

Not because words solve the thing, but because once something becomes speakable, it often becomes metabolizable.

Before language, it can remain diffuse, implicit, almost haunting.

After language, it enters relationship with consciousness differently.

And that alone can begin to change its structure.

Off Ramp to Brave Spaces's avatar

Oh this is luscious

Mark Crutchfield's avatar

Thanks πŸ‘

Fragments and the Dark's avatar

This felt minimalistic in the best possible way! πŸ₯° Loved it! πŸ–€

Sara da EncarnaΓ§Γ£o's avatar

Excellent.... but now I am craving peaches...

Mark Crutchfield's avatar

Haha! Perfect then! Thanks! β™₯️

Sara da EncarnaΓ§Γ£o's avatar

Was the first thing I went to buy this morning…

Mark Crutchfield's avatar

hehe. Maybe I should have started a peachy delivery service with the poem too :)

Sara da EncarnaΓ§Γ£o's avatar

hahaha!!!

Gary L Taylor's avatar

Wonderfully done, Mark, very juicy.

Mark Crutchfield's avatar

Haha! Thanks Gary!

Dorie Snow/ι›ͺ倚丽's avatar

Peaches lovely fruit

Mark Crutchfield's avatar

And more :)

Thanks, Dorie! β™₯️

Sapphra | Poetry's avatar

What a delightfully juicy poem, Mark. Loved it so much.

Mark Crutchfield's avatar

thank you Sapphra!

Leonorra Dainler's avatar

This was fairly juicy and sticky !! Love it

Mark Crutchfield's avatar

Hehe. Thanks Leonorra! πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Dean M's avatar

Marvellous, as usual. The Art.

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Thanks, Dean!

Good Witch Poetries's avatar

#gifted πŸ”₯πŸ”₯

Mark Crutchfield's avatar

Thank you β™₯️

Good Witch Poetries's avatar

Umm no thank you!! πŸ€“