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Petra's avatar

Quite a lot said there, and skillfully so. BTW, have you tried Ferrero Rocher Dark Chocolate Hazelnut? It'll almost mend a broken heart. <3

Mark Crutchfield's avatar

Awwww Thank you Petra!

I like the almost. But regardless, we'll give it a try — it'd be wrong not to <3

Petra's avatar

It might completely, depending… :)

Christopher Van Name's avatar

Some things linger forever.

Mark Crutchfield's avatar

They do! Perfectly said.

Optimism from Darkness's avatar

Ooo, that was powerful!

Aaliya's avatar

Oh how I love this! Quietly delicious 🍫

Mark Crutchfield's avatar

Lovely!

Makes me hungry for something sweet just rereading it!

Thank you @Aaliya 💛

Aaliya's avatar

Welcome 🤗

Wendy Cockcroft's avatar

What a beautiful poem! Such a melancholy finish. Love it!

Mark Crutchfield's avatar

Thank you Wendy! 💛

I wanted to leave a little lingering taste, so I’m glad you felt it.

Kate's avatar

Makes me think of chocolate in a whole new way! I love the time stamp too.

Mark Crutchfield's avatar

Thank you Kate!

For some reason the timestamp felt needed!

Mark ✌️💙🫂's avatar

So deep. I wondered where it was going.

Mark Crutchfield's avatar

Haha. Thanks Mark!

Hina Gondal's avatar

Wow I was never fond of chocolates but I love this truly

Mark Crutchfield's avatar

Hehe

Thank you Hina 😊

AsukaHotaru's avatar

The 1:27pm bit and that little vapours of cocoa, rum maybe turn had me grinning~ It got so weirdly exact in the best way. Haha! Then you hit me with longer than you were and I kind of just... yeah. You got me there, Mark.