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Dorie Snow/雪多丽's avatar

One of the sayings I hold dear to my heart is “Be like water.” Water is soft and yielding, it will bend and form, carry and support. Over time it smoothes rough edges. Disrespect water and it will ravage, drown, deplete. Your poem reminds me of this.

Nadia Barghout Brown's avatar

Gorgeous. The powerful presence and the impermanence of water are seamlessly woven together here. Just like water does. Beautiful.

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