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Mark Crutchfield's avatar

Thank you @Shebeastspitn, for sharing 💛

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Thank you for sharing @Soft Ground 🤗

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♥️

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Thank you for sharing @Dorie Snow/雪多丽 !

Brandi Lynn's avatar

That line—'the moonlight was already writing it on the wall'—is stunning. There is such a painful beauty in that silence, and the regret of not reaching out before the light moved aside. You’ve captured that specific ache of being right next to someone and yet worlds apart ✨

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Thank you so much from me and @nina. I love you felt that ache, as we were hoping it would come through in the poems.

Aaliya's avatar

Beautifully written! The imagery of the moonlight and the emotions conveyed are truly captivating.

nina's avatar

Thank you Aaliya 🌙

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Thank you Aailya!

Christopher Van Name's avatar

“No colour was needed to find her”. This reads like a dream.

nina's avatar

Oh, thank you! ☁️

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Thannk you @Christopher Van Name 😊

Damien's avatar

Great work on this. I really loved the whole thing…these lines stand out…

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a lightness

to darkness.

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a presence in black—

where things unfold

nina's avatar

Thank you, 🖤

Mark Crutchfield's avatar

Thanks Damien! Glad you liked it!

Vianne Armour's avatar

Wow 🤩 sensational. Amazing work both.

nina's avatar

Thank you Vianne 💕

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Thank you @Vianne Armour!

Good Witch Poetries's avatar

Absolutely beautiful!! 🖤⚪️🖤

nina's avatar

Thank you 🩷

Mark Crutchfield's avatar

Thank you Kaia 🤗

MoTy's avatar
Mark Crutchfield's avatar

Nice song MoTy. Thanks for sharing!

Be Budding's avatar

Always almost 🙌